This picture is the prompt for week 8 of the 100 word challenge.
Why can I not get to sleep?!!!
Maybe I should have a drink of milk.
"Oh why," I wondered.
I should go for a walk, that will burn some energy. When I was walking I came across a statue. I had a look at the statue then continued on. Five minutes later, "WHAT," I thought, I had already passed this statue.
I progressed on but I heard a noise. I quickly turned around and the statue had moved and when I turned around again the statue was chasing me. I screamed for my life and ran my heart out.
Hi Dylan. How scary - being chased by a statue! I liked the way you composed your entry this week. The ideas and events flowed well and were easy to follow. Just remember when you are asking yourself a question, in speech or thought, to use a question mark inside the quotation marks. Keep up the great writing.
ReplyDeleteMrs W (Team 100 Australia)
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